Saturday, July 4, 2009


Max’s POV

It was just past 3 AM and I slowly opened the door, hoping to not wake up my dingbat brothers. I stepped inside and closed and locked the door behind me. I opened the hall closet and hung up my jacket and discarded my shoes. I walked in to the apartment and saw my brothers fast asleep on the couches. I headed to the bedroom when I heard a faint voice calling my name from behind me. I turned on my heel and headed back toward the living room. “Dining room,” she whispered and I headed in to the dining room where I saw her sitting on the table looking out the windows. The moonlight from outside outline her silhouette and I took in the sight for a moment before I walked around the table and stood in front of her. She wrapped her arms around my neck and kissed me on the lips, slowly falling forward in to me. “Why are you still awake?” I mumbled against her lips as I wrapped my arms around her waist, taking a step forward, pushing myself up against her. “I was too excited to see you I couldn’t sleep, but now, now I’m tired.” This is exactly why I wanted her to move in with me. This is exactly why I want to marry her. I never would have thought I’d come home to a beautiful woman who’s excited to see me when I come home. Yet here I was, wrapped up in her arms, hearing her tell me she stayed up to see me come home. “I love you,” I whispered before kissing her again, lifting her up in my arms. She wrapped her legs around my waist and I carried her to the bedroom. I laid her down on the bed and headed to the closet where I stripped down to my boxers and tossed my clothes in the hamper. I turned around and saw her looking at me with a smile on her face. “I haven’t changed in to pajamas yet,” she whispered and I looked down her body to see she was in a grey t-shirt and jeans. “Want me to get them for you?” “I’m too tired to change, will you help me?” A flash of lust flashed through her eyes, with a playful smile on her face. I walked over to the foot of the bed in front of her and climbed on top of her. I knew I wouldn’t get laid, not tonight anyways, but I was going to enjoy her body regardless.

I felt something bouncing on top of me and I slowly opened one eye at a time, seeing Lillianah straddling me, bouncing up and down. I glanced over at the clock to see it was a little after 10:30 in the morning. “What are you doing?” “Well see here’s the deal,” she smiled as she pulled her shirt off over her head and laid down on top of me, pressing her bare chest to mine. “My boyfriend’s been gone for five days, and normally I would fill that void by playing with myself to you know, take care of some things. But this boyfriend of mine has two brothers and it just didn’t seem morally right to play with myself when they are just down the hall.” I raised an eyebrow at her and looked over at the door, seeing that it was locked. “Where are they now?” “I sent them on some errands, they should be gone for a few hours, because these errands I sent them on, well it’s going to take them all over town.” I smiled and shook my head at her, she was a genius. “So what do you want to do?” I asked just as her hips started to grind against mine. “I have a few ideas, that is of course you agree.” “Oh I agree to anything you have going through your mind right now.” She grinned before she sat up and wasted no time taking my boxers off of me. She stood up on the bed, with me between her legs as she slid her underwear down, stepping out of them, then sent them flying across the room by her toes. “So Mr. Talbot, I’d like to introduce you to a little toy of mine. I went out and bought it yesterday, and I’ve been waiting to use it.” I couldn’t help but laugh at how funny that sounded. She sat back down on my legs and reached forward, under her pillow and pulled out this rubber ring. “Have you ever used one of these before?” She asked as she placed it in my hand and I looked at it. There was a silver egg looking thing on top of the ring with a button, when I pushed the button it began to vibrate. “Um, where does this go?” I asked as I turned it off and watched as she plucked it out of my hand and moved her hands south. She slipped the ring over my penis, resting it at the base. She pushed the button and I immediately bucked my hips up. That’s something I’ve never felt before.

I know I’m an athlete, but as I walked out in to the living room I felt and looked like I had run twenty miles all while smoking a pack of cigarettes. “Fuck, it’s about time.” My head shot up and I saw Frank and Will on the couches. I glanced over at the clock, it was just past 1 PM. “Holy shit,” I smiled when I noticed the time. I didn’t know I could have sex like that for two hours straight. “Eh fuck you guys, I haven’t seen my girl in five days. Anyways, I thought she said you two would be gone for a few hours.” “Maxime, it has been a few hours. Fucking rabbit.” I smiled as I watched Lillianah walk in to the kitchen and head straight for the coffee, her hair still a mess. “Elle m’a allumé!!” I shouted to Will and Frank as the three of us began to laugh. Lillianah slowly turned around and gave us an odd look. “T’es un putain!” Frank laughed and I picked up the pillow behind Will’s head and chucked it at him. “Dare I ask what you three are talking about?” Lillianah asked as she stood next to me and wrapped her arm around my waist. “Umm, well, see, they’ve been back for awhile now and I told them you led me on, and Frank just called me a whore.” “Well you are a whore,” she laughed as she let go of me and headed back in to the bedroom. “Maxime, good job picking her,” Will smiled as he headed in to the kitchen and went straight for the fridge. “You guys have fun while I was gone?” “Oh she’s a riot. We had a blast!” Frank laughed from his stationary spot on the couch. “So she knows about the ring,” Will whispered to me as he stood next to me. “Yeah I know,” I mumbled as I dropped my head. “She asked if we knew when you planned on using it.” I raised an eyebrow and looked at him. “Really?” “Yeah, but we don’t know so that’s what we told her, and obviously you don’t know either.” I nodded my head, Will was right, I didn’t know. “I’ll be right back,” I smiled as I headed in to the bedroom to see Lillianah walk out of the bathroom, freshly showered with a towel wrapped around her body. “So I was thinking the weekend of the 20th we should bring our parents out like we talked about. I have two home games, that Friday and that Sunday, they can stay through Monday, what do you think?” She reached in to her purse and pulled out her calendar, flipping forward two pages. “Yeah that should work, I do have work that Saturday, but I think I can get it off.” “Okay, I’ll call them,” I smiled and watched as she walked up to me and gave me a kiss before retreating back in to the bathroom.

I closed my laptop after booking four flights. Two from Montreal and two from Philadelphia. I could tell in the voices of our mothers that they were very excited to meet. “Alright you assholes, what’s on the agenda for today?” “Well, you need to shower, because you smell like sex, then we’re going to see this house you want.” I tilted my head as I looked at Will, “we can’t just walk in you know, we-“ “I know I called the real estate agent,” Lillianah interrupted as she sat down next to me. I looked up at her head and began to laugh, slowly at first. “What’s so funny?” she asked as she turned on the couch to look at me straight on. “Don’t be mad, promise me you won’t be mad.” Her look turned hard, slicing me in half. “You look like you’re balding. Your blond roots with the black hair.” “Balding? Really? Well if you must know, I’ve learned to not dye my hair on days I work because I sweat so much it runs and usually ruins my clothes.” I nodded my head as I tried to understand, but really, I didn’t. “You work tonight?” “Yeah, but only from 9 to 11, and it’s my understanding you three ‘assholes’, as you put it, are coming as well as some of the guys on the team.” I nodded my head again, faintly remembering having this conversation with Sid and Flower the night before. “Alright, well I better go shower then.” I kissed Lillianah quickly before heading for the bedroom.

Lillianah’s POV

I held on tightly to Max’s hand as we stepped inside the house. “So it’s four bedrooms, one downstairs, two on the main level then the master bedroom takes up the whole top floor, which also has a wrap around balcony. Two and half baths, a very open floor plan and you saw the two car garage out front.” My eyes lit up as I looked around the empty room. Beautiful was an understatement, it was an absolute masterpiece. With each step we took the house got better and better. “I think you need to buy it now, and move in today so we can sleep in actually bedrooms and not on couches,” Will laughed which made the real estate agent laugh as well, giving a hopeful look to Max. “Yeah this is amazing, but the key is the master bedroom,” he stated before shooting a wink my way. “No darling, the key is the kitchen,” I smiled as I dragged him toward the kitchen in the back of the house. The minute my foot hit tile I felt like I was in a Martha Stewart magazine. I didn’t want to show my excitement as this was Max’s deal, so when I looked over and saw the huge smile and his eyes light up like on a little kid’s on Christmas morning, I squeezed his hand before letting go and went deeper in to the kitchen. Windows lined the back wall, with a sliding glass door that led out to a small balcony. There was no view, but it didn’t really matter. The view was inside the house. “All of the cabinets are bamboo, brand new stainless steel appliances and the counters are granite,” the realtor read off a sheet as we moved through the kitchen. “Color Maxime, do you see this? Color!” I laughed as I ran my hand over the granite that almost looked like the Mojave desert with the reds blending in with the golds. In the center of the kitchen was a huge island with a stove top in the middle. I looked out toward the eating area and could see Max and all of his friends gathered, laughing, sharing a beer while I cooked up something in the kitchen. “This is amazing,” I whispered to myself, suddenly feeling a pair of arms wrap around my waist. “Can you see yourself making s’mores in here?” He whispered in to my ear. I leaned back in to his chest and smiled. “I could see myself doing a lot more than just making s’mores in here.”

I braced myself as we headed up the stairs to the master bedroom. I knew that if it was anywhere as amazing as the rest of the house I was in serious risk of cardiac arrest. I closed my eyes as we walked through the doors and when I felt Max squeeze my hand I slowly opened my eyes. Huge windows filled all three walls, a sliding glass door on the wall in the back of the room. I smiled as I moved around freely, there was enough room for two or three beds. I pulled over the bathroom door and laughed when I saw the black counters, white walls and grey trim. I knew I couldn’t get away from that color scheme that easily. His and her sinks, a tall linen closet, a huge shower with an even bigger shower head. I stepped back out and headed for the closet, easily twice the size of our current one. Next I headed for the balcony, smiling widely at Max as I walked past him. I stood in the back corner looking at all the old buildings surrounding us. My eyes wandered down and I smiled at the tiny garden that was next to the house. “This place is amazing.” I turned around and smiled at Will and Frank as they joined me outside. “It is. I think Max really likes it too.” “He’s ecstatic that you like it,” Will smiled to me as the three of us looked back down at the garden. Wondering where Max was, I headed back in to the house where I saw him and the realtor in the bathroom and Max was signing something. “What are you doing?” I asked as I wrapped my arms around his waist. “I’m becoming a home owner,” he stated like it was no big deal. “Serious?” He set the pen down and turned in my arms, kissing me on the forehead. “Serious.”

“Hey Max!” I shouted from our bedroom as I was getting ready for work. A moment later he walked in tossing a kitchen towel over his shoulder. “Want to help me pick out my outfit for tonight?” A smiled crept over his face as he tossed the towel on the bed and opened the bottom drawer of the dresser. My work clothes drawer. “Um, how come I’ve never seen these before?” He asked as he pulled out my black leather chaps. I shrugged my shoulders and smiled as he handed them to me. A white bikini top and then black booty shorts fell on the bed next to me. “Going for Coyote Ugly tonight are we?” I laughed as I stripped down my clothes and slipped on the ones he picked out for me. I slipped in to black boots, then Max helped me put on my pea coat. I grabbed my bag which had an change of clothes in it and walked out of the bedroom. “Alright, so I will see you guys later, remember I’m off at 11, so if you want to enjoy this outfit you need to be there by 10.” Will and Frank’s eyes immediately shot up at us and I laughed as I kissed Max and left the apartment. As I walked to work I pulled out my phone and sent a text message to Alicia. Max bought a house today, it’s beautiful. I pulled my arms close to my chest as a cold breeze came up blowing my hair in my face. I whipped my hair to the side when I felt my phone vibrate in my hand. Well aren’t we becoming domesticated! Ha! I have a date tonight, so coffee tomorrow? A huge smile came over my face when I read she had a date. She was always looking for the right guy, the guy that wouldn’t screw her over, so she only went on dates it seemed like once every six months. Yes, coffee indeed, call me in the morning, not too early though. Once I got to the club I did a quick run through of the VIP list. I laughed to myself when I read ‘Ring leader plus six’. I began to set up and when I turned on my laptop I began to laugh as my new desktop wallpaper was a picture of Max and I at the brewery. It was a cute picture, he was kissing my cheek and I had a cheesy ass smile on my face. I couldn’t wait to see him later, I wanted to dance with him, to drink with him. I just want to be with him.

I stopped and starred as I saw what looked like three triplets walk through the front doors. They walked alike, and with every head turn Max made, Will and Frank would follow, not wanting to miss out on any of the action. The brothers made it past security a lot easier this time around and I grinned as I watched them, along with Sidney and Marc, with their girlfriends, walk by. Max of course stopped and took his time looking at my outfit. “Do you take requests?” He asked with a slick smile on his face. I rolled my eyes at him and turned around to my lap top where I mixed in “Crash and Burn”. “You’re just too much,” he smiled as he reached out and pinched my exposed thigh. “See you soon.” I nodded my head and counted down the minutes until I could change and relax with my boyfriend. I wiped the sweat off my forehead with a towel and felt a hand land on my shoulder. I turned around and smiled at the radio DJ, then my eyes lit up as I realized it was Bonics. A friend of mine that works at a radio station, who I hadn’t seen in a few years. “Hello Miss Lil, I heard you’re dating a rather famous hockey player.” I pulled away from our hug and rolled my eyes. “Who said he was famous?” I laughed as I pointed over to the VIP where the guys were all drinking and enjoying themselves. “Talbot, that’s awesome. Well hey, I’ll take over from here, but we should get together sometime.” “I’d like that,” I smiled as I packed up all my stuff and headed downstairs to store my things and change. I changed in the bathroom in to a 70’s inspired white tunic and a pair of skinny low rise jeans, with white stilettos. I grabbed my bags and headed toward Andrew’s office. When needed I always dropped my stuff off in his office for safe keeping so when I opened his door and felt five pairs of eyes starring at me as my eyes laid on the white lines in front of them, I froze. “Jesus Lil, come in or out, and knock next time would you,” Andrew shouted and I hesitated for a moment before I stepped inside shutting the door behind me. I suddenly didn’t feel so safe leaving my things in that room. I trusted Andrew though, probably a little too much. I opened his closet and tucked my things inside, shutting the door and turning back around. As my hand reached the handle, Andrew called out after me, “want any?” My whole body and senses were screaming yes, but a tiny image of Max sitting in the VIP waiting for me was stuck in my mind. Then all at once, the voices in my head that I managed to push out a year ago were back, telling me that one hit wouldn’t hurt anything. It was just one hit, no harm, no foul. I walked over to the table and Andrew handed me his credit card. I swiped away a reasonable line, not huge, but enough to get a high. I grabbed a straw off the table and bent over. In one swift motion my nose felt like it was going to start bleeding at any moment and I had to blink my eyes hard a few times to get the first effects out of the way.

As I walked up the stairs the whole building looked a thousand times more beautiful than it actually was. The lights bouncing off the walls kept my attention for the most part. Once I reached the top of the stairs my eyes fell on Max’s as he sat on a couch, by himself with both of his arms outstretched hanging over the back of the couch. He smiled at me as I approached him and stood between his legs. I crawled on to his lap, straddling him, not caring who was around, not even knowing if anyone was around anyways. The feeling of his thighs against my legs sent a hot flash through my body and I pressed my chest in to his. He felt like a solid pillow. Something I wanted to melt in to. I wanted to climb in to Max and stretch out, enjoy the heat and safety he brings me. “Are you drunk?” he asked with a laugh and I shook my head no. “I’m turned on.” His hands found the small of my back and I nearly jumped as they felt cold as ice. The further his hands moved up the colder I got. “Stop moving your hands,” I demanded before kissing his neck. “I’m not moving my hands Lil. Are you sure you’re not drunk?” I pulled away and looked in to his eyes. Something flashed over his but I dismissed it the moment I saw it. I sat up on my knees, pushing my chest in to his face, running my hands through his hair. I sat back down and leaned forward, pressing my mouth to his ear, “come dance with me.” I didn’t want to let Max out of my touch, he felt too good. I loved that every part of my body he touched made me tingle. The feeling of his hand running down my arm as I climbed off of him sent chills through my whole body. I held on to his hand and headed toward the dance floor but I was stopped. I looked over my shoulder to see Max still sitting on the couch. “Max, come dance with me!” He squinted his eyes at me then tilted his head, “no.”


Lexi said...

wow. just wow. that was amazing, I think Max knows and I hope he helps her. This was amazing, amazing. Sorry, I think I've said it enough now

Heather said...

I can't believe she did that. Bad, Lil!

Max totally knows... Oh Lil.. Why??

Aeryn said...

Oh, shit... what is she doing?!?! I agree with Lexi, I hope Max helps her out cause I'm thinkin he knows. Great job :)

Trish said...

Ahhhh why did it have to end there!!

I loved this.
Update soon.

PensRock said...

That was an awesome update! Please don't make us wait to long to find out what happens!!!!

Zigh said...

God, I hope Max doesn't leave her! She's going to need him now more then ever... bad, bad Lil!

Anonymous said...

such a great chapter. i really hope max doesn't pull the douche bag card and bail.
update soon!

Val said...

That was a great chapter - what was she thinking? Update soon, please!

EHisCDN said...

oh my frickin god!

She should not have done that, I don't even know why she would?!?!

I hope Max doesn't let her get away with it, and that he helps her. It's especially bad that she did it when his brothers were there, first she's drunk meeting them, and then high!!!

Great chapter!

Jay said...

I recently stumbled across this story (and the finished one about Sid, too), and I just flew through it. It's a unique story, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it!

Kari said...

Oh crap. I was hoping Lil wouldn't do that. I can't wait to see what happens next!

mrsmalkin71 said...

HOLY CRAP!! what the heck was she thinking?!?!
i hope Max doesnt bail!!!

Jay said...

Thanks for the comment! That means a lot, coming from someone with stories I enjoy.

Can't wait to see where you're headed with this.

PeytonRose said...

wow that was an amazing update.
i agree with everyone && can't believe Lil did that.
i hope Max stays with her, she needs him now more than ever.

Charlottiie said...

Oh noooo Lil. This is a great story, update soon!